Unfortunately this game doesn't seem to be working for me. I'm trying to play on a mac and every time I try to open the game I just get an error message saying the game cannot be found.
The game was very interesting, and I definitely feel like you have a lot of points to make there, and it is designed in ways that are quite innovative, it definitely made me think about narratives, hopefully the kickstarter works out and I can get to see the full version one day!
I actually didn't have a problem with the amount of dialogue, but similarly I had trouble remembering who was who, and the screen panning back and forth when different people were speaking made me sort of dizzy.
It would be great if there could be an option to review the previous text, just in case people clicked too fast and missed something, but couldn't go back to check. And sometimes I clicked on the button to talk just to see what my options are, but I didn't really like any of them, so I wish there could have been an option to back out of talking.
This was a fascinating demo. The dialogue felt very natural and the characters all felt like real people to me. My only suggestion is to work on cutting down on some of the dialogue. It was a great read, but I feel like edits might help the pacing. Also, when identifying what jurors I liked and didn't like to the professor, I forgot who was who! Maybe including images for the player to select would be a good idea.
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Unfortunately this game doesn't seem to be working for me. I'm trying to play on a mac and every time I try to open the game I just get an error message saying the game cannot be found.
The game was very interesting, and I definitely feel like you have a lot of points to make there, and it is designed in ways that are quite innovative, it definitely made me think about narratives, hopefully the kickstarter works out and I can get to see the full version one day!
I actually didn't have a problem with the amount of dialogue, but similarly I had trouble remembering who was who, and the screen panning back and forth when different people were speaking made me sort of dizzy.
It would be great if there could be an option to review the previous text, just in case people clicked too fast and missed something, but couldn't go back to check. And sometimes I clicked on the button to talk just to see what my options are, but I didn't really like any of them, so I wish there could have been an option to back out of talking.
interesting demo, I agree on cutting down on dialogue
This was a fascinating demo. The dialogue felt very natural and the characters all felt like real people to me. My only suggestion is to work on cutting down on some of the dialogue. It was a great read, but I feel like edits might help the pacing. Also, when identifying what jurors I liked and didn't like to the professor, I forgot who was who! Maybe including images for the player to select would be a good idea.
All in all, this was awesome. Great work!